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Black Velvet, Red Satin
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Black Velvet, Red Satin |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
"Black Velvet-Red Satin" With coils of black velvet And strips of red satin I am bound to you Turned around Upside down Rapt in the gaze of your eyes My soul Shatters My heart scatters Nothing else matters Save the spark Igniting inside You are life The reason I breathe the fuel that fires This insatible need Take me to that sacred place Where time crumbles Without a trace You are blood The red tained sea Wash me away For none to see Unto the sweat slickened shores of thee. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"With coils of black velvet And strips of red satin I am bound to you" You have drawn a beautiful picture here spike. Good read. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Slow smoulder, but for sure kindled! ~ Karen ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gabriel~ 'Take me to that sacred place Where time crumbles Without a trace' Oh my ... big *sigh* *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Take me to that sacred place Where time crumbles Without a trace" Wonderful...especially loved the above lines! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Take me to that sacred place Where time crumbles Without a trace It is a wonderful place...I've also visited it a few times. A very passionately pleasing write!! |
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