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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-02-17 04:10 PM



if i was your Indiana Jones

would you let me jump your bones?

     with the right rope

       we could elope

   before Valentine's Day

before anyone has a chance to say

     congradulations!!!!!!!!!!



                              love,

                              howard



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ecrivan
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1 posted 2006-02-18 01:10 AM


No one has responded, is it because of the Love Howard at the end? Up to the salutation, I follow and to be in love is a good thing


Air Goddess
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since 2006-02-11
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2 posted 2006-02-18 09:59 AM


Dream on!! she would probably say...
but I am sure if you are the right
rope, she would elope..cuz you are
her Indiana Jones....
Clever! This beautiful poem of yours...
I enjoyed it!

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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3 posted 2006-02-18 03:42 PM


thanks
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