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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
0 posted 2006-02-16 10:38 PM


A pink-cheeked sunrise
Draws in ruby red
Half hushed morning
Returned from fate
An answer

Fresh air eyes
Lay low in carouse
Below the navel sway
Sending scented signals
In question

Shrugged from his shoulder
Turn away silence
A rooted foothold
Reluctantly blonde his sigh
An answer

Full bloom buttons
Turn down playful smiles
Flashing white sweet juice
Rain upon his lips
In question

Vine, wrapped ankle
Moving slowly north
Inside the delicate slope
Of gulping disbelief
An Answer

Then turned rosy side
To the watering words
Let lean gently in his arms
Grape, teased lightly on the tongue
The wine

Copyright Kkh 02/16/06
© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-02-16 10:50 PM


What a beautiful vineyard of love!

I couldn't capture any
special line, for they all
lingered wonderfully!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2006-02-16 11:09 PM

this is a banquet
a feast of words
both delicious
and sensuous
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-02-17 12:41 PM


Captivating TD. You are generous with your words.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2006-02-17 01:06 AM

enjoyed!

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2006-02-17 12:48 PM

You dazzle my senses with every word.

Love the last stanza, the sweet smell of the
swirling bouquet, and the heady taste going down.

Beautiful work, Kathleen~
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
6 posted 2006-02-17 03:51 PM

I'd like to order a case of this wine, Kathleen.

Make that two.

you have a way with metaphor and your work is always delicately woven womanly.
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
7 posted 2006-02-17 04:27 PM

Wow!

Now I need a cold shower.

JL

vandana
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8 posted 2006-02-17 06:49 PM

enjoyed
Martie
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9 posted 2006-02-17 06:51 PM

TD  I'd like a bottle of that!  
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