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poetry_queen
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0 posted 2006-02-16 06:49 PM



i stare
deep within you
breathing into your soul
absorbing life you took from me
back then.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-02-16 07:41 PM



Big sigh...

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-02-16 11:53 PM


Wow!
Powerful little punch to this.
Awesome.
TD

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-02-17 12:08 PM




Oh yes! So well done leanne!



ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2006-02-18 11:34 AM


bump~*~
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just out of reach
5 posted 2006-02-18 11:44 AM


~wonderful~
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

garysgirl
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6 posted 2006-02-18 11:45 AM


So beautiful!!! Thank you
so much for sharing this lovely!!
Hugs,
Ethel

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2006-02-18 12:15 PM


A painful cinquain, poetry queen.
Looking back reminds me of my own mistakes, and how vulnerable I can be.  
What I didn't see back then is so obvious to me, so I'd rather not look,

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2006-02-18 01:36 PM


a wonderful cinquain..I love them..

M

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