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Moon In A Black Leather Chair
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Moon In A Black Leather Chair |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
"Moon In A Black Leather Chair" The hearth is hot, a fire is burning friendly within Keeping the shadows, on the wall at bay The cactus sleeps in watery dreams Dreaming of a true love far away across a celestial sea Outside, beyond the window, the moon sits on high Bathing the shadowy world below, in her subtle, silver rain To a story book page, in a black leather chair A fabled knight clad in shining steel Returning to his love To live happily ever after Oh if only it were real The cactus stirs, up from the depths comes to wake out of his dreams Unseen eyes reflect the moons eerie grace She is more than she seems 11/13/1996 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"The cactus stirs, up from the depths comes to wake out of his dreams Unseen eyes reflect the moons eerie grace She is more than she seems" Oh Gabriel. This is so lovely. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very nice. love this piece, keep up the awesome poetry... Poetry can get you very far |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
aww, why thank you. I'm truly, deeply touched. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ds "Outside, beyond the window, the moon sits on high Bathing the shadowy world below, in her subtle, silver rain" Outside my window is a place I go too, for the moon and rain and so many other things with the wealth or my imagination included. Loved your view!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The hearth is hot, a fire is burning friendly within Keeping the shadows, on the wall at bay The cactus sleeps in watery dreams Dreaming of a true love far away across a celestial sea Outside, beyond the window, the moon sits on high Bathing the shadowy world below, in her subtle, silver rain This reminds me of sitting by a warm cozy fire and listening to the rain outside and the crackle of the fire inside. This is lovely, a very much enjoyed piece of writing.  seek the flame within yourself |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write here! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gabe, this is amazing because it immediately made me see a writer looking out the window sitting at a typewriter wondering what to write of. and succeeding. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
tThis was amazing, you have the talent of taking the words we've felt and writting them down reminding us we've felt them. Did that make sense? Well I felt every word you've written here and I loved every minute of it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See? So, you'll share more, soon, yes? |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
Yes I will be posting more soon. Littlewing, When I wrote that it was actually in the middle of one night in wisconsin. I am impressed, truly. I didn't think I'd get such a response to this. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I shall be back! Glad to see your post, but I must read this when I can keep my eyes open. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
You crafted this beautifully and I loved reading it...the moon with "her subtle, silver rain" -- cool beauty! And such covert "eyes." What story book pages your poem leaves. I am enchanted! ~ Karen ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was lovely, gave the reader a comfortable feeling... thank you for writing and sharing. |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
Thanx Lee, and you're very welcome. Gald you enjoyed it as much in your awake eyes as in your sleepy eyes Karen. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Much enjoyed, am looking forward to reading more from you and then He created the horse... |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really enjoyed this poem |
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