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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-02-16 03:25 PM



Beyond an old man
Under wooden eaves
The cold winter rain



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-02-16 07:20 PM



Beneath winter's sky
Shivers collide with old bones
Snow and ice cascades

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-02-16 07:23 PM


This made me feel the chill of winter and age...Nicely done John!
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