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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-02-16 02:38 PM


Midnight in your
mind, sunshine in
round and round
dreams, rising and
falling from the
dream consciousness, but
not wanting to
leave the sky
and ocean scenes,
blasting to my
inner brain creases.
Spellbound by the
dulcet lilting, lapping,
plashing waves, curling
crystal; tidelining sands
of crushed white
powder, blinding under
amber beaming sunlight.
Then off out
to sea, atop
beryl watered shoals,
a yacht sailed
into my view.
White sailed, mast
lustrous in the
hot beating sun.
Long days languid,
measuring their beauty
by the cerise
clouds, like islands
floating in a
sky sprawled to
the steps of
heaven and eternity.
Rocked to sleep
by the soothing
waves to wake
in a new
world of reality,
mundane, but easily
as important to
my loving soul.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2006-02-17 07:49 AM


floating on a big "fluffy" cloud.....

Dreams give hope~

~ARh

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-02-17 08:21 AM


beautifully articulated, loved the feeling and visuals it gave me...
dgvarner
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3 posted 2006-02-17 10:00 AM


such wonderful imagery!  Loved the last bit the very best

(in this supposed to say "splashing"?: "plashing waves")

enjoyed..
hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2006-02-17 11:59 AM


ARH thank you for your reply..GR

Lee...Thank you for your nice reply..GR

DG...thank you for your words...no ''plashing'' is what i meant to say..see dictionary.com..

Plashing = the sound of light splashing..but i can see where you thought it may be wrong..thank you for noticing...GR..

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

tracie66
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5 posted 2006-02-18 04:59 AM


WOW! this is an exceptional write - very visual and most enjoyable
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



dgvarner
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6 posted 2006-02-18 10:54 PM


ok..I'm with you now.. "plashing"   I've been edumacated

hugs, g

iliana
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7 posted 2006-02-19 01:12 AM


beautiful imagery
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