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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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caramel on glass with sun behind my fingers are tongues tasting the warm window cheek of your afternoon gown you are a dancer at the evening there on the edge of night's high heels and bare limbs, a vulgar tree perhaps for the voyeur that dreams this fancy from inside his lurking lair waiting for the silhouette of your soul as amber is the spotlight's lantern and you are willing to make shadows that his mind can play in there like pools with arms and legs and wind moving hair shapes shifting into just the waves from anacapa before illusions bring evening erasures ___________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
could not highlight a single sentence, as each one was better then the next...you fingerpaint butter illusions... wonderful first morning read |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enchanting imagery, Dark One....  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee J, thank you lady friend. _____________ ms sun..thank you for the enchanting wave |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
as amber is the spotlight's lantern and you are willing to make shadows ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love the soft light DS, and the way your words move the reader. Wonderful view from your minds eye this morning. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluzey...thanks lady friend.. |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Very creatively crafted... You have conceived a Poem of Poems |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms AirG, thank you so much passion friend |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Once again Dark S, you've crafted a wonderful piece of work. The imagery, and just the wording alone is genius. Your poetry seems to come from somewhere other than this world, lol. Always a pleasure. - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend Ed,,,thanks so much guy...yes it does come from somewhere else..not sure where. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
A work of art DS, a keeper for sure! Adored the imagery. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
you are a dancer at the evening there on the edge of night's high heels there on the edge of night's high heels of night's high heels I bow to you oh master  absolutely brilliant going into my library m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sigh... sensuous Stranger, very sensuous... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Your word choice is unique..it takes a different road..and shines an altogether different light...maybe that is what makes it so good..thank you i enjoyed the words.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
finger painting ones thoughts on skin lightens a souls dance My spirit will rise |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
outside, it's barely in the 20's but in reading this, heart's chambers are warmed I sit with closed eyes savoring a Channeled sunset memory Thanking you for ~an amber moment~ |
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