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these tears.... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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I wipe away the tears that form, and as I do ~ I’m fearful you ~ ~~ will see these tears I cry, and know ~~ I am weak, ~ I cry in the dark at night, hoping you will not hear my sobs ~ ~ you will not see me cry and so I lay hear crying my- self to sleep and you will never know the tears I cry, alone at night ~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sad,but dont we all have a private side that we need to escape to once in a while..thank you for the words.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Goldenrose~ thanks for your comments and yes we do need that private side...appreciate you reading this, thanks. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Indeed it is heartbreaking Tracie...thank you for sharing... |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
sucha hearfelt poem |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tracie, I know this particular pain, it is one of the hardest to bare. Hugs to you sweetie, nicely written.. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Dear Tracie66, nothing melts a mans heart faster than his ladys tears. Thanks for sharing. :-) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thank you all for your kind comments, know that they are very much appreciated. my winged ~hugs~ floating across to all of you  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well now, this touches pretty deep inside my heart. As I believe comfort to be a gift of love and weakness an opportunity to share strength. And I see you as a woman I deeply respect with courage to be vulnerable. Well done.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the format..and yes..I know the feeling. For some reason we just can't show our weakness to all. M |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Larry~ your comments soothe - thanks so much my friend, appreciate your words. ~hugs~ Tracie Dearest Maureen~ thanks sweetie for your reply, it's very much appreciated ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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