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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-02-16 12:33 PM




Back Once Upon A Time

I have been reminiscing
From gathered memory
Those places and times
You had shared with me

Like -minded in thought
We had much to pursue
Still knowing every time
It could never come true

Our meetings arranged
Planned by you and me
Every level we reached
Taking flights of fantasy

Romantics sailed away
Like dreamers often do
Compiled into chapters
A story in sequels grew

Fond memories I recall
Each destination online
A story of togetherness
Back once upon a time


Hope ©2006
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http://thestarlitecafe.com/poems/96/poem_818162.html

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1 posted 2006-02-16 01:54 AM


Don't we all have memories like this that we like to look back upon and wish that it could have gone to the fullest extent, whatever that extent would be.  In reading this poem, I was reminded of my one fiance who I was madly in love with and we were to be married in 3 months.  He left my place on a Sunday night and I never saw him again.  He never said goodbye or anything.  I have no idea where he is.  Your poem reminded me of the good times he and I had together.  Beautifully written.

Sheri Adams

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2 posted 2006-02-16 02:11 PM


At least this story lived!
Some stories only make it in the
imagination...
Beautifully done...I love it...

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3 posted 2006-02-16 04:57 PM


A nice poem of fondest memories..thank you..

Goldenrose.

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