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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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night has her artistry but her attitude sometimes puts heavy metal in her mouth she chews the sculpted legs of the grand piano's classics leaving only teethmarked poems to be debated and debrailed in time when one just considers her artistry and not the state of her mind and today shall be another one of her famous instaurations on burlap with watercolor dilutions of closed eyes and gloving hands ___________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
had to read this, as I marvel taking the train to Philadelphia... ahhh hem, now, back to your poem... its so grand to see a man inspired by a woman's mind, mature and sweet, tender is the listening...a sense and all knowing that she is your anima...part of the integrity of your personality...symolically compelling emotion...oh, mine does that to me to... wonderful words of coffee this morning...with a fragrance of hazelnut... |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Such vivid imagery, such beautiful writing. Enjoyed  Andrew |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "when one just considers her artistry and not the state of her mind" You see so well into both!  |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Magnificently done... Classic...the way she leaves teethmarked poems... A Da Vinci of Word paint you are :-) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j, humble thanks lady friend, I do enjoy the coffee times with your mind. ______________ friend andrew, thank you sir for the consideration of my scribles ______________ ms martie, thank you little neighbor lady, you keep my flowers in bloom with your replies. ___________ ms airG, you blush me to a humble bow, thank you for the eyes |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you walk gracefully between gutter and red carpet and when i think i snagged you, you do an about face on me xxooxx |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
"and today shall be another one of her famous instaurations on burlap with watercolor dilutions" WoW. that's niiiice~ ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...have always been here just pretending to be a tree waiting for you to climb me slowly...thanks hon..missed you here _______________ bbg, thank you daughterdeem..nice to see you in the house again always |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
mmm artists have many moods sometimes one needs to create with a little attitude. to keep ones mind from their own art~ My spirit will rise |
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