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Open Poetry #37
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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477
0 posted 2006-02-15 06:09 AM

I embedded you in my mind,
to last me a lifetime.

Despite, they wouldnt stay.
Memories of you,
are like melting clay.

No form, no stand.
Only a mess.

I played with the sand.
They ran out of my hand.

No grasp, no hold.
Liveless and cold.

How can I make you stay?
Please, for another day?
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starinthedark
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since 2006-02-13
Posts 32
1 posted 2006-02-15 05:20 PM

I played with the sand.
They ran out of my hand.

really can relate...ty*
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