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FNG
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0 posted 2006-02-15 05:48 AM

You brought the sun to our lives,
and put it in our skies.
Our shadows danced, caressed and endeared.

You breathe into my hair,
they danced in the air...
like happy dancers without a care.

How I have walked with you.
Wishing it would continue,
but i knew,
it would not come true

A shadow follows,
wherever I stroll..

Is it you?

Looking close,
it's your ghost.


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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2006-02-15 05:55 AM

True love is a ghost that haunts us,
some ghost aren't always scary~

Enjoyed your poem~

~ARh
FNG
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2 posted 2006-02-15 06:11 AM

thanks, romantic heart  

Glad you enjoyed it.
wvatvrider
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3 posted 2006-02-15 06:13 AM

romantic
FNG
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4 posted 2006-02-15 06:40 AM

Hi wvatvrider,

thanks,

just trying hard to be a romantic..lol



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5 posted 2006-02-15 03:24 PM

FNG~
Sounds like maybe someone stands a 'ghost of a chance'?

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2006-02-15 03:26 PM

very nicely done!  I enjoyed this.
The Lady
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7 posted 2006-02-15 06:00 PM



"A shadow follows,
wherever I stroll..

Is it you?"

Nice work FNG.
FNG
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8 posted 2006-02-15 08:57 PM

Thanks all for your kind words


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