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hdman
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0 posted 2006-02-15 01:59 AM


The Love Tango


Flies tango toward the burning light,
Knowing it would be their last, final flight,
Grasping this concept made me realized,
My life was destined for this doomed fate...

When my heart was first given to you
Is for you to keep and to be cherished,
Never did I expect that you return it to me, so soon,
With rejection in my mind,
I have decided to give up and stop pursuing...

In my heart this feeling still lingers,
In my soul it still aches for your presence,
These feeling should not exist at all,
At the time when I decided to give it up...

But instead it grows stronger and stronger,
What should I do, please tell me?
My mind says no,
but my heart says I must go?
Will I ever be with my unrequited love?

© Copyright 2006 hdman - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-02-16 03:37 AM


Rejection is a message to the tango...James
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-02-16 08:38 AM


Liked this.
The artist holds the answer...if validation is required, then the reader whispers back...be a brave grape.

TD

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-02-16 09:44 AM


I believe if we do whats best for the other person (s) with their hearts our first concern, before ourselves, then and only then, will it all work out flawlessly...???


BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2006-02-16 11:20 AM


Not an easy tango to follow, when both the heart and mind are trying to lead.

Welcome to the blue pages, hdman~

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-02-17 12:20 PM




It would see even unrequited love is a dance hdman... nicely done.



ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2006-02-18 11:33 AM


bump~*~
garysgirl
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7 posted 2006-02-18 11:55 AM


Beautiful with a twinge of sadness.
Enjoyed reading about your dance.
Hugs,
Ethel

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8 posted 2006-02-18 03:04 PM


sometimes people only feel what they fear
and not the feeling of one who is near~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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