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0 posted 2006-02-14 06:58 PM


(I wrote this just over five years ago, barely a month after joining Passions, and feel this is a poem that still sighs in my heart to this day as I still long to be loved for the first time.

I guess I'm just blessed I remain the same person to this day, as I dream ever sooooooo much to only make my dream love the happiest girl she can be, wherever she is! )


Wherever You Are, My Love...
By: Noah Eaton
2/4/01

Wherever you are, my love
I just want to say
That I think of you all the time
And I dream of you every day

Every time I look up at the stars
I remember looking into your gorgeous eyes in my dreams
Tears of Jupiter fall from your eyes, twinkling in the starlight
As I dance with you on the rings of Saturn, twin-tailed comet rain buzzing like honeybees

Every time I smell a rose
Your breathtaking beauty comes to mind
The magic of your love is more beautiful than the most luscious rose of all
The sweetness of spring blooms in you, every breath and sigh you make is a burst of sunshine in my life

Every time I lick a piece of candy
The sweetness of your smile shimmers in my head, tingling enchantingly
I remember kissing your sugary lips, the taste of your mouth is the sweetest thing of all
Soft lips sighing in velvet touches of true lovers blessing

Every time I step outside into the beauty of nature and listen to the birds sing
I swear I can hear your golden hearts words echo upon the mountainside
Your heart sings loves words with a voice sweeter than a flock of sparrows and robins
Your loves melody makes my dream come true, two lovebirds singing together in the heavenly tree of life

Wherever you are, my love
I just wanted to tell you how I love you so
And how much I am awaiting that day
When we fall into each others arms, loving each other so

Wherever you are, my love...I love you!



"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2006-02-14 07:45 PM


Very descriptive and well written. I enjoyed this, Noah. Thanks for sharing.

Mike

"If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead."

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2 posted 2006-02-15 09:07 AM


"Wherever you are, my love
I just wanted to tell you how I love you so
And how much I am awaiting that day
When we fall into each others arms, loving each other so"

She is out there dear Noah...
Soon...very soon she will sweep you off your feet!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Air Goddess
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3 posted 2006-02-15 10:50 AM


This is cascades beautifully
like a waterfall on a hot day....

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-02-15 10:51 AM


Noah, with a heart and mind as yours, you will someday...patience, and most of all remember, God is preparing you for her...and so...welcome change...the blessings of time...life and loving self.

this was a marvelous read


starinthedark
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5 posted 2006-02-15 11:28 AM


Noah, very beautiful writing. It is clear you deserve all you wait for. When she does show herself to you hold on tight and enjoy the ride!
As I read all the poetry here it is all very inspiring. It can be in the words of others that inspires us to write our own works of art. Thank You, starinthedark xo

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