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Be My Valentine ( To all the ladies and mothers at Passions )
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Be My Valentine ( To all the ladies and mothers at Passions ) |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Be My Valentine By Paul Wilson With a shy look covering his face he asked the question on his mind Would you please give me a chance wooooould you be my... my valentine I’ve admired you from afar since we first met it seems I think about you everyday I see you each night in my dreams Afraid of the answer he turned away with his head hung low Just to share his heart with another is all he ever wanted…you know Wait don’t go she softly said to him I’d really love to be your valentine today You would he shouted…really yes she said that would be okay I’ll buy you some roses and candy just give me a minute or two I’ll even write you a poem today cause mommy I love you I’m so glad you're my Valentine mommy cause you’re the apple of my eye I really want to thank you from the bottom of my heart But Mommy please don’t cry ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (02-14-2006 07:57 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very sweet, Paul! Happy Valentine's Day!!  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice one Paul! JL  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How sweet and sincere Paul.. This one brought a tear to my eye. Happy Valentine's Day! ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I remember a little boy who gave me a butterfly he had made at school. To him, it was not good enough for me. To me, it is a forever treasure. Now 26 years later, he is still my Valentine, and he still does not understand it is forever! Thank you for this reminder of the bond between mothers and sons. I must call him. Sweet sentiment for a special day, that reminds me we have valentines in our lives every day.~ Karen ~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Beautiful Paul. You've captured it! I have one of those little fellows too... all grown up now and... mothers always cry. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I got my "usual" valentine card from my son today, wherein he always puts the same thing he has for over 25 years now. I will never get tired of reading it either, and have saved them all in a book. They always read, "To The First Woman I Ever Loved On Valentine's Day, With Love From Your Son," and each year I still laugh and cry. Your poem was just sent to him and I know he will smile reading it. Happy Valentine's Day Paul (Lyra would have loved this one.) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So sweet, Paul! Hope your day was happy. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This certainly brought tears to this mom's eyes Paul. Oh, how I remember those days when my sons ( now 23 1/2 and 22) were that young and eager to please Thanks for the reminder of life's fraility Ruth |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Martie...Glad you like this, This happenned to me with my daughter long ago, she thought I was really something when I bought her a heart shaped box of candy the first year she was old enough too know about Valentines. I think she still has the box. Thanks again for reading...Paul JL...Thank you for reading and your reply...Paul Nancy...Sorry about the tear but glad you cared for this.Thank you for taking time to read and for your tender reply...Paul Klassy Lassy...You are so lucky to have a memory like you spoke of and he is very lucky too have a mother as thoughtful as you. I hope your conversation with him warmed both of you hearts...Paul The Lady...You are so right, I believe Mothers are little boys first Valentine sweethearts. Thank you...Paul Mysteria...Your son is very lucky too have a caring mother as yourself and I know you really appreciate those cards each year. Your comment about Lyra loving this touched a tender spot in my heart and brought a tear to my eye. I was just thinking abouth her the other day while reading her Valentine poem in the newsletter. Thanks so much for many things...Paul iliana...My day was fine. I hope you had a wonderful day and thanks bunches for taking time to read & reply...Paul Ruth...Fond memories reborn are the best kind, glad you have many of those with your two sons. Thank you for understanding and for the sweet reply...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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