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ghettogurl13
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0 posted 2006-02-14 03:02 PM


no need for words,

silence rings,

a soft senstual melody carries itself through the air,

unheard,

whistling along with the gusts of wind blowing by,

louder,

but still silent,

silence lasts,

a never ending tune carried out and into your soul,

memories full fill the beat,

a soft lullaby,

the rhythem always will be heard through your heart,

silence makes love grow




© Copyright 2006 Sarah H - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2006-02-14 04:17 PM


I like this!
More please...

JL


wvatvrider
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2 posted 2006-02-14 06:14 PM


very nice poem--ghettogurl
          spelling corrections -sensual
                               -rhythm
continue to write-I very much like your style.  You might try a spell check program or (dictionary.com) for words you are unsure of-correct spelling adds to an easier understanding and may keep someone from being distracted from your message--You write beautifully.
         Danny

ghettogurl13
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3 posted 2006-02-15 11:38 AM


thanx
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-02-15 02:50 PM


Sarah~
Nice ... very nice~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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The Lady
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5 posted 2006-02-16 12:36 PM




Nice work Sarah!



XOx Uriah xOX
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6 posted 2006-02-16 01:39 AM


Beautiful !      I enjoyed this a great deal.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2006-02-16 03:40 AM


Enjoyed...James
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