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0 posted 2006-02-14 02:05 PM


Let Me Know First Thing In The Morning (Invisible Valentine)
By: Noah Eaton
2/14/06
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If you get this kiss I blow from here,
from my balustrade, my sweet dear,
let me know first thing in the morning...
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If it’s your breath I hear in my dreams,
your tender touch that makes my heart skip a beat,
let me know first thing in the morning...
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Can you hear me speak,
bleeding my heart out,
cause when I’m asleep,
you’re all over me now,

cause I believe you are my invisible valentine...
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A first flush of lilac perfumed my sheets,
creamy serenades and moonlight that won’t recede,
and turtle doves that circle my head whimsically...
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...and I feel my heart has went from pillar to post,
finding my way to where you are, chasing a ghost,
longing to hear the chords of your unchained melody...
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Can you hear me speak,
bleeding my heart out,
cause when I’m asleep,
you’re all over me now,

cause I believe you are my invisible valentine...
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IT IS YOU THAT GETS ME ALL ELATED,
I WANT TO SHOW YOU HOW MUCH I’M DEDICATED,
I KNOW IT’S YOU,
STROKING MY LIPS,
FIRST THING IN THE MORNING...
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Can you hear me speak,
bleeding my heart out,
cause when I’m asleep,
you’re all over me now,

cause I believe you are my invisible valentine...
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cause I know you are my invisible valentine...
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"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2006-02-14 02:21 PM


Beautiful, loving Valentine dear Noah!!
You are going to make a woman very very happy!


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2 posted 2006-02-14 02:53 PM


ohhh boy, this was certainly beautiful...my oh my, whispy and full of warmth...

  

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3 posted 2006-02-14 04:54 PM


Noah...Very tender words from a very tender heart. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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4 posted 2006-02-14 06:59 PM


Noah, go out and breathe life into her-Melt her cloak of invisibility.    
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5 posted 2006-02-14 07:00 PM


my wish for you
is that SHE becomes visible

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