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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-02-14 12:57 PM



i've never been this possessive before

i admit that i'm obsessive to the core

            to hear her snore

           beside me at night

                   despite

the fact i haven't been able to find the right

      ways to avoid the plight

of rubbing her the wrong way

i know that i'm a long way

from redemption  in her eyes

so i'll just keep baking pies

and maybe on day i'll get lucky enough to surmise

                    a way

                 for us to play

             some backgammon



                                           love,

                                           howard



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-02-14 01:50 PM




You keep pumping poems ... you're sure to get her attention~

Happy Valentine's Day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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wvatvrider
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2 posted 2006-02-14 05:57 PM


get her attention--make sure she sees the poems
starinthedark
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3 posted 2006-02-15 05:52 PM


You shall be redeemed. Never stop trying, keep baking those pies!!! starinthedark
XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2006-02-16 04:16 AM


::smiles::   Humble pie has such a delicious  flavor.
tracie66
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5 posted 2006-02-16 06:28 AM


this is great Howard - enjoyed it very much
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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