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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2006-02-14 10:36 AM


Valentine’s and blues
Just don’t mix,
You’re in a jam
You need a fix

For the errors
That you made
And the sorrow
That you gave

Please don’t blame me
For feeling this way

For not being ‘into’
Valentine’s Day,

For expressing
Emotions true


Thanks for this gift
To me, from you

For this song I'm singing ...

these valentine’s blues.


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-02-14 11:04 AM


sometimes it doesn't work out the way we like, though, we're never thinking about what goodness we have in our lives, only our losses at the time...then, one day, like a spring day, it buds in our minds, how truly blessed we were, for both the good and bad....

aching poem dear heart




Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2006-02-14 11:08 AM



I can relate
As I can enjoy your words once more

I’d be an all American boy
If I had a red heart to go with my blues
And my white bread attitude

Gloom

HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2006-02-14 12:39 PM


I can relate , to me its a day no different from any other

Hope

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-02-14 12:45 PM


Ah sweetie...don't be blue.
Go out and treat yourself to something special!
Buy some chocolates or dinner..
and take these warm hugs I'm sending you right now!
Love ya lady~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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