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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-02-14 03:11 AM



4445
Flame to an Ember
13 October 2005

To be a writer or poet - but not able to right
As if the mind did believe it was wrong
to compose under this light

One line of a whisper to hear
and a word out of place to mistake
In having writer’s block to one whom knows
how hard to overcome that can be to partake

To have stopped and started
yet never truly let go
Along a road of tranquility
in thinking outside the square
Where from within a round whole
words written in time would again grow

Like timber to a tree
and a chip off the block
A flame to an ember
and words again in mind to flock


"Reading maketh a full man, conference a ready man,
and writing an exact man."
Sir Francis Bacon (1561 - 1626)
English author, courtier and philosopher




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wvatvrider
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since 2006-02-04
Posts 78
West Virginia,USA
1 posted 2006-02-14 07:14 PM


writer's block-something we all experience time to time
poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-02-14 07:19 PM


the above works was written as a joke, in relation to a person who was claiming writers-block

poetry comes in all forms - I myself composed 1200 or more poems in the last 7 months and yes I do get writers block at times as well


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2006-02-14 07:49 PM


"the above works was written as a joke, in relation to a person who was claiming writers-block"

Poetry for many of us is a very personal thing and, therefore, I rarely critique form or meaning.  

Thank you for commenting on my poem, "You'd Never See Me...." -- that particular poem was a response to a challenge to take the identity of another poet and then let people guess who I was masquerading.  You'll find that challenge in the dicussion areas.  I see you are new here and probably wouldn't have guessed whose style I was writing unless you'd spent hours and hours of reading.  

Welcome to PIP.

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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4 posted 2006-02-14 08:07 PM


I don't read much poetry, I am not a poetry fan - maybe that makes me an idiot - then I know good and I know style - I just am not a poet, just the idiot at the key board or pen in my hand.


5084
Poetry or Fact

14 February 2006


Being the poet
does give reason to write
and style can be but an objection

For who was in control of the pen
the might of the sword
Or those who never
will understand

As if Browning - Frost and Wilde
were never poets at all
Such was the true observer
to what poetry did mean

An entertainment - a way of life
more just boredom to strive
For one was good to an other

Only Shakespeare could write his own
everything else was but imitation


What was poetry, poesy, verse - (literature in metrical form) a writing style, literary genre,
genre - (a style of expressing yourself in writing). In another way poetry was (any
communication resembling poetry in beauty or the evocation of feeling) an expressive style,
style - (a way of expressing something (in language or art or music etc.) that is
characteristic of a particular person or group of people or period; (“all the reporters were
expected to adopt the style of the newspaper”) Conformity or to conform - certainty that
was what poetry never was.



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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2006-02-14 08:41 PM


I think maybe you've misunderstood what I meant by reading and reading.  I was referring to reading other poets here at PIP...and they are all poets and so are you.  The challenge was to masquerade as a PIP poet, not one of the masters....lol.  Just for fun and practice of matching their style of writing.  There is much to be learned here if you like to write.  Obviously, you do.  
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