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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Quick Dust Scuffing his toe boot into the fine red clay, shifting dust up into the wind, a humph of heart darting somewhere to find a warm chocolate taste again… then an expletive escaping, Travis looked over at Konrad…. “What?” “I miss ‘em both.” When wind scuffled maple leaves left to play in time what was to come, as one needs what one can’t have, them words were uttered, “Which one, the most?” “Each, for their own being.” Clenching chin to lip, Travis nodded. Then nodded again. “Yep.” Both turned, one heading south, the other, west, to find a find like Iambe, and Dana… if only in memory. ~*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grins let the love tails unwind |
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om Junior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 31ontario/canada |
lost loves went dust kicking eh, yeap, *shakes head* "to find a find" love that line nice read thank you, interesting kind of tell for me, thanks ! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
caught my interest again with this.....*hugs*....jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Happy Valentine's Day~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Both turned, one heading south, the other, west, to find a find" Happens all the time...yep! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunshine...Enjoyed very very much. Great poem in the continuing story. Over the mountains we know not what lies there another challenge another dare another love someone to care Across the sea beyond the distant shore A dream is calling calling me on the wind of tomorrow this I can't ignore ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing Karilea  Andrew |
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wvatvrider Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 78West Virginia,USA |
we have a host of memories of those who have moved on to find a find-rekindle our memories |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Happy Valentines Day, Sunshine! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I love this, toe scuffing, dust blowing and settling over empty places in the heart, without much ado, but moving like wind through cavernous spaces. Awesome Valentine's Day echo of the heart. ~ Karen ~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Scuffing his toe boot into the fine red clay, shifting dust up into the wind" Another lovely one Sunshine! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
YOu didn't see me, but I have been following behind you this week...gathering gems into the treasure chest of my favorite Sunshine poems. Enjoyed every drop of this. TD |
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