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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2006-02-13 11:53 PM



Would thouset be mine?

This heart lies open,
come touch it, with
your velvet words,
smooth, silky, like
sweet chocolate, melting
across warm lips.

Its yours if you want it,
ready to love again,
love so sweet,
tender, caring, passionate,
wrapped around you, softly,
tenderly warming your heart.

All I want is to please you,
be your every desire,
make all your dreams come true,
dream with you, grow old with you.

Let me listen to your soul,
share your thoughts with me,
all that you are,
me living inside of you,
let me be your everything.

Who will claim this heart?
with brave , honest love,
love deeper than skin,
stronger than time,
willing to take risks?

So shall I ask again?

Would thouest be mine,
oh Valentine?

  

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (02-15-2006 07:50 AM).]

© Copyright 2006 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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1 posted 2006-02-14 12:01 PM


Once again .... this must me your favorite holiday!!

simply beautiful!


ct

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2006-02-14 12:07 PM


Why yes it is, apart from my birthday which is also in the same month, and coming up really soon.

Now if I just had that kind of love that I write about, that woul be a wish come true, maybe I will make one when I blow out my b-day candles...and hope it will come true...LOL

Thanks ctowen~
~ARH


J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2006-02-14 02:10 AM


A treat...James
RedStoneEB
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4 posted 2006-02-14 05:58 AM


Be mine, my valentine lol
poettothecars
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5 posted 2006-02-14 06:07 AM


with a poem like that - there will be no shortage of Valentines

a poet who cares

desert-spike
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6 posted 2006-02-14 06:28 AM


That is as hot as it is romantic. I dunno whether to go all melty, or all gooey...
wvatvrider
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7 posted 2006-02-14 06:30 AM


best Valentine I've read in a long time
LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-02-14 07:52 AM


how could anyone refuse after such a sublime poem....lovely write, as always.

Hugs and Happy Day to you
Lee J.

Goldenrose
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9 posted 2006-02-14 09:30 AM


A poem of deep love and respect..yes i will be your valentine ARH..now and ever after..thank you ..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

JL
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Texas, USA
10 posted 2006-02-14 04:08 PM


B E A U T I F U L!!

JL


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11 posted 2006-02-14 04:56 PM


Beautiful writing ARH and an especially lovely Valentine poem

Andrew

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