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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2006-02-13 09:15 PM

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And then I will be gone from your world
But as much there as I have always been
Erased from the pages of your stories
And cursed by words written in pen
I'll disappear, washed out by the rain
As each page is torn and thrown then
And the good times you will have forgotten
As the words blur on the pages forsaken

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

© Copyright 2006 Juju - All Rights Reserved

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-02-13 10:07 PM

OUCH!!
Nice write.

JL

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2006-02-13 10:40 PM

yikes
he'll be sorry

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-13 10:50 PM

"And then I will be gone from your world
But as much there as I have always been'

Yes indeed! Nice work.

Kathy
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

4 posted 2006-02-13 10:56 PM

To the point...oh my!

Hugs to you girl,

Kathy

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2006-02-17 02:44 AM

Thank you very much...

This is one of my sadder poems..

-Juju

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

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