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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-02-13 08:30 PM



Let's Get Mushy One MORE Time !
An Overdose Of Valentine ~Sweetness~
~Marge Tindal~

Honey, do you love me ?
Darling, do you care ?
Sugar, I just yearn for you.
Baby, do we dare?

Sweetheart, do you love me ?
Lovey, do you hear?
Snookums, can you stand ...
~Sweet Nothings~ in your ear ?

Babe, I hear you calling.
Cupcake, here I am.
Angel, I have fallen ...
God, I love this man !

You'd be my Valentine,
if I had not hesitated ...
This overdose of sweet stuff
has got me nauseated !

Sugarplum, honeybear,
I want to be your Valentine.
If you don't get a tummy ache
reading this little rhyme !


*Pass the Pepto Bismol, PLEASE !


A regurgitated piece of 'fluff stuff'!  




~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com   

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-02-13 08:45 PM


OOOOHHHHH I LOVE IT!!!


Magnus
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2 posted 2006-02-13 09:14 PM


Excellent fluff stuff there M.T.  Yes it is,
I wish I had thought of some of those lines.

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3 posted 2006-02-13 09:16 PM


*Smile*

-Juju

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-  
*    Juju     *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

sandgrain
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4 posted 2006-02-13 09:58 PM


That's what you call sweetening the pie, isn't it?  No Pepto Bismo needed.  It's so cutsie and endearing.

   Rae

iliana
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5 posted 2006-02-13 10:32 PM


I loved the light-hearted feel of love about this, Marge...it's cute and sweet!   ....jo
The Lady
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6 posted 2006-02-13 10:52 PM




Smiling! So cute!


jody5
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7 posted 2006-02-13 11:56 PM


Loved that cute poem Marge.  


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2006-02-14 12:54 PM



Happy Valentine's Day to ALL~

I so appreciate leaving a little *smile* with this oldie-goldie~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

tracie66
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9 posted 2006-02-14 02:00 AM


lol...
Margie - great stuff!

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Marshalzu
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10 posted 2006-02-14 02:52 AM


Enjoyed

Andrew

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11 posted 2006-02-14 05:22 AM


Oh that was wonderful! *DS twitches from a  Valentines Day candy hangover*
RedStoneEB
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12 posted 2006-02-14 06:11 AM


Simply beautiful
wvatvrider
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13 posted 2006-02-14 06:36 AM


Marge, sounds like a valentine for young'ns if you leave out the pepto-good stuff
LeeJ
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14 posted 2006-02-14 07:46 AM


love your poem...and Enchantress's reply, how do you do that?  You guys are marvelous artists...

Thank you Margie and Happy Day to you!

Betty
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15 posted 2006-02-14 08:29 AM


This is cute. Happy Valentine's Day to you!
Love ya,
Betty

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16 posted 2006-02-14 11:19 AM


Let's Get Mushy One MORE Time !


Heh-heh-heh.....that would be nice, but I have a feeling Mr. Graham Todd might offer a wee objection.....

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17 posted 2006-02-14 03:38 PM


LOL... Don't need Pepto... giggles ARE a cure. *G* This is just what I needed, Marge! *S*

And ROFL @ Ratleader... Mushy would love the wickedness of your response! LOL

JL
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18 posted 2006-02-14 04:12 PM


Heehee!!

JL

Klassy Lassy
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19 posted 2006-02-14 08:53 PM


Mush!  Mush!  Mush!

So cute! Sweet nothings and heart burn!

LOL  

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20 posted 2006-02-15 03:27 PM


MUSH!!  I love MUSH Marge!  I loved this.
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