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Open Poetry #37

a love poem, gloom style

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2006-02-13 07:45 PM

(forgive me, gloom?)

‘neath hot words of passion we kissed
love graced the night heavenly,
as far into mourning’s mist
our bodies sang in harmony

ah, ‘twas just a dream I had,
for my wet cheeks upon the pillow
were but the thorny tears of the sad

but who knows
what the morrow brings
perhaps, the rose?

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-02-13 07:53 PM

What a lovely inspired write Kacy.
Much enjoyed what Gloom inspired.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-02-13 09:34 PM

I know this feeling, in fact, the very same
thing happened to me this morning....

Midnitesun

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Gaia

3 posted 2006-02-13 09:37 PM

Nancy, thanks for reading
Barry, sorrow to hear that

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

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In your dreams

4 posted 2006-02-13 09:43 PM

I liked this alot

-Juju

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-02-13 10:12 PM

This is so great Kacy...
Smiling, because I know our dear Gloom will think so too.

Hugs,
TD

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2006-02-13 10:39 PM

thanks juju, for reading
TD, thanks, I sure hope he enjoys the thoughts

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