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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-02-13 07:20 PM



ValenTankas Of Olde

~*Marge Tindal*~

From Poe to Lenore
'Merely this and nothing more'
Breezes blow her name
'Tis the wind and nothing more.'
'Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore." '


~*~

Oh, 'Annabel-Lee'
'In this kingdom by the sea'
'The stars never rise'

but hold you in great surprise
'darling, my life and my bride.'

~*~

'She covered me warm'
'When the light was extinguished'

Lit my heart at best
'For it sparkles with Annie'
'Of the love of my Annie—'



*A Valentine or two 'tweaked'
with a little Poetic license.

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2006-02-13 07:37 PM


There is a nice vision here

Dave

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2 posted 2006-02-13 07:46 PM



Thank you, Dave~
Edgar's love for Lenore is a good inspire for Valentine's Day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2006-02-13 08:00 PM




W O N D E R F U L ! !

Happy Valentine's Day Marge!!!

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4 posted 2006-02-13 09:53 PM


They certainly are POEtic, Marge.  Very nice.

    Rae

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LOVE sharing a Valentine's Day poetic moment with each of you~

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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6 posted 2006-02-14 08:20 AM


I love this Marge.
Betty

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7 posted 2006-02-14 10:14 PM


I really enjoy seeing and reading your talent.
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8 posted 2006-02-14 11:12 PM



Oh yes, Marge! Well done. Happy Valentine's Day!

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9 posted 2006-02-15 12:31 PM


Very creative Marge I liked the way it was laced with you.    


             Hugs  Kimberly  


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10 posted 2006-02-15 05:02 AM


Great writing Marge, very cleverly executed but most of all a wonderful Valentines read.

Andrew

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11 posted 2006-02-16 02:20 AM


wonderful inspiration indeed Margie - well penned.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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12 posted 2006-02-16 02:23 PM


Clever Girl!  Thanks Marge...I enjoy Poe as well.

INclan

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13 posted 2006-02-18 06:32 PM


your gift is poetry in motion
full of grace and devotion~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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