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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2006-02-13 05:14 PM


Rivulets

Icy rain
sings “it’s still winter”
to girls in short skirts
and summer dresses
they rush for shelter
in shop doors.
I continue my journey
dressed for an expedition.



Andrew

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1 posted 2006-02-13 09:36 PM


Andrew, this sounds like something interesting to do...on any day.
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I like this alot

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3 posted 2006-02-13 10:45 PM


polarbear style, right?
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4 posted 2006-02-14 12:18 PM


Enjoyed this~ Like the new photo~

~ARh

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Thank you for the wonderful replies

"polarbear style, right?"

Exactly

Andrew

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6 posted 2006-02-14 11:14 AM


Andrew~
I like this poetic slice of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2006-02-14 11:15 AM


marvelous write
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