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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-02-13 01:45 PM


We spiralled thin white connectors aimlessly into the light dark blue to flicker and spark as we propelled elements to connect

Blinded by a sun in rays we held the spasm echoing vibration as heat turned to vision

Swaying we watched as connections made and broke echo’d light on a blinding sky of electric vision defying our desire

As a sun rose in the east
A dawn began
Striding chasing the running day
Behind

Rain heavy drifting on those dull
Sparkling waters
Under leaves
Song of my feet
Sung with my heart
Rhythm for your soul

I call you upon the earth
I call you for all you are worth
I call you for my body
Come to me Home

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
1 posted 2006-02-13 03:59 PM


Another fine piece of work.
Enjoyed

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-02-13 04:03 PM


"Blinded by a sun in rays we held the spasm echoing vibration as heat turned to vision"

Another excellent write Dave!!
This one speaks to me.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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