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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-02-13 12:29 PM



Silently she slips,
from the embrace
of Morpheus. Tips
off to surface,
within your dreams
daughter of sleep
and night, beams
within hearts keep.
Long robe embroidered
with stars, raven
hair free, unencumbered,
watching from heaven.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2006-02-13 12:50 PM


absoutely...and she is not allowing me to wake up this morning...

beautifully written...amazing

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2006-02-13 03:32 PM


She watches from heaven.....loved the fantasy feel, and the entire poem.

~ARH

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-02-13 03:50 PM


Beautiful...I really love this piece.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2006-02-16 12:20 PM


Lovely work Goldnerose~
It does indeed read like
an embroidered tapestry.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-02-16 07:24 PM


Such beauty in these words GR, very much enjoyed the mystical feel of it.  
Edward Grim
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Greenville, South Carolina
6 posted 2006-02-16 07:31 PM


Very nice, I enjoyed it. Cheers  - Ed

"Give me a museum, and I'll fill it."
- Pablo Picasso

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