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Whirlwinds |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Through purple haze and fuschia sunsets reminiscent of lazy daze and whirlwinds that change us. Like a gentle gust takes our breath away calming in the sway as palm leaves glisten. Keeping rhythm in the breeze keening warm with intent leaves a trail written in the stars. Linking heaven and earth glints like a ray of diamonds dancing in the moonlight. Sweeping in slow motion a thousand images splash across the sky tickles and teases like summer rain. Falling away forever in tune with the intimacy of loving. Spilling from a fountain in the sunlight with a quiet beauty that sparkles on it's own. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Lovely does as lovely sees. Beautiful imagery.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi, Bluesy! This is just lovely! A beautiful skyscene for tonight!  ....jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I don't know if you intended this Bluesy, but flow of this accelerated and decelerated to me, as if whirling my mind. It's good to read your poetry again. misce |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely work! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hey Bluesy!!! Good to see you! You have been missed...  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Bluesy! We've missed you! So good to read you again.. and this is a beauty!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful, Lori girl! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nice to see you back bluezy one..and this is a nice way to ring the doorbell |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
blusy, you do paint a georgeous love song |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I very much like the whimsy and play of this. Nice to read you again!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so lovely, Bluesy One... You've been missed! *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BLUESY! hello again, Lori! I loved the colors you splashed on my blue screen tonight! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Hmmmm ... never seen a sunset upon the ocean ... not until now!! thanks for the view! ct |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful writing, per usual. I'm glad when I see you've posted as it happens so sparringly, or perhaps I've just missed a lot and at that I digress... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're all just as nice as can be. Thank you kindly~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*dustin off the shelf, and tucking this one away* God Lori, this is one incredible write, such beautiful images you bring to my minds view. It is SOOOO good to see you posting hon, you and your words are both extremely missed around here. seek the flame within yourself |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I think we could get there on my cruiser. Lovely dear lady, as always. Miss ya' and haven't forgotten to pray for you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Where have you been, missy? *smile* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Falling away forever in tune with the intimacy of loving"... You have a way of making startling discovery right before my eyes. Hugs, and welcome back. TD |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
fantastic write - wonderful imagery and perfect flow, all made for a delightful read. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's nice to be home. Thank you so so much! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lori...This sounds like a beautiful waltz between the Moon & Sun over the calm waters of an ocean. Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
quiet beauty ...your words~~ hope all is well M |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
enjoyed... hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
reminds me that i could still dream nice to read you blondie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I don't always know what to say or how to thank you properly. So often I come away feeling like maybe what I write isn't half bad after all. So I shall thank you for making me feel that way, and for the time you take to read me. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Lori!! I was so glad to see you when I opened up the blue pages today. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem. Your writing is always awesome, Sweetie. Huggies, Ethel |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
If I were writing this, every verse would start with the words, "For you I wish"....not because it would improve this beautiful poem, but because I do wish all of this, for you. May it be, and may it remain for keeps! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely lovely Ms Blues...nice to have you back m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You all encourage me to keep on keepin' on. Thank you, always~ |
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