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Lighthouse Keeper |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(The days before and after Valentines Day always make me feel lonely, so I tried crawling around in the skin of a lighthouse keeper and trying to envision what a valentine feels like to him/her in his/her point of view. I guess we all feel like this at one time or another!) * Lighthouse Keeper By: Noah Eaton 2/11/06 . . . Northwest horizon overcast, watching the cold front drifting through the glass... ...it's a banshee of serenity... . My body is a house of many windows, seeing all my allusions and illusions free throw, a hundred and forty feet above the sea... . . Most nights are starless, each day feels much too lonesome... . ...I feel like a lighthouse keeper, waiting for my time to come... . . Feeling the dew point take effect, it helps put me in the mood to reflect, . why I must keep polishing, this guiding love light daily... . Sometimes I feel I’ve lost all concept of time, but my time alone has helped me, find something to live for... …something great enough to die for... …that you always share in my dreams... . . Most nights are starless, each day feels much too lonesome... . ...I feel like a lighthouse keeper, waiting for my time to come... . . I swear each and every night and day, you’re the foam gushing with the waves... . . ...my Aphrodite, waiting to sweep me off my feet... . . Most nights are starless, each day feels much too lonesome... . ...I feel like a lighthouse keeper, waiting for my time to come... . waiting for my time to come... . . . . . . "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I think you managed to capture perfectly the sense of isolation, great writing Noah. Andrew  |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Bravo! Well done Mistletoe Angel. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah, you have captured the sense of longing so well. Not to worry my sidekick..soon she will appear. Heart hugs. In the midst of winter, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oops..liked it so much I came back again ! In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. An invincible summer. |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Great write! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"...it's a banshee of serenity..." Noah, that is some expressive writing! This is really, realy good and I hope you include it on that CD, too. Hang in there, Noah Angel...at the right time, she will appear.  ....jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I love your creative mind and how it carries to others. The stars are there, whether they are seen or not. Some day... Good luck to you, and... happy Valentine's Day, Noah. misce |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I swear each and every night and day, you’re the foam gushing with the waves..." So poignant Noah... good write. Happpy Valentine's Day. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Just beautiful Noah, it takes talent and heart to feel the feelings of others, to be in their shoes. You have a beautiful soul~ ARH  |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Your not the only one who feels this way...great write! Hugs, Kathy |
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