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Open Poetry #37

From X-Ray to Albany

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

0 posted 2006-02-12 05:03 PM

From X-Ray To Albany

Jungle surrounds us
Prohibiting progress
A density of confusion
In which we lose
Direction
Ambushed by uncertainty.

Andrew

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-02-12 05:11 PM

I know this...
intensely.

Well done, Andrew.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

2 posted 2006-02-12 11:32 PM

Excellent!

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

3 posted 2006-02-13 01:30 AM

You're saying lots with this piece, whether you think you are or not :P

I can't give you a constructive critisism of your punctuation because it's part of your style, and though your particular use of capitals drives me nuts, it's part of your style and it's part of what makes it so Andrewish

and then He created the horse...

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