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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-02-12 04:53 PM


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Glass Mirrored Cage

02 February 2006


Snow drifts upon a heart
out in the cold of desire
Her beauty trapped inside
This glass mirrored cage

No true way to open
not debonair to reflect
Like a two way mirror
This glass mirrored cage

Summer days in winter reign
left alone to tears fall
Knocking but answer void
This glass mirrored cage

Temperatures rising
dark to light
Red white in maple leaf
This glass mirrored cage



“For now we see through a glass, darkly; but then face to face: now
I know in part; but then shall I know even as also I am known.”
1 Corinthians 13: 12 KJV



a poet who cares

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-02-12 05:10 PM



Caught in crystal
shimmering rainbows
streaming from a sun stain
refractions
breaking
sound...

~*~

See?  You inspire!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-02-12 11:14 PM




"Summer days in winter reign
left alone to tears fall
Knocking but answer void
This glass mirrored cage"

Nice work!


poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
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3 posted 2006-02-12 11:23 PM


does the poet ever reveal their source, and those thoughts?

now there is a question in relation to what this works was truly about!

a poet who cares

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