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Something Good Might Come Through
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Something Good Might Come Through |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Something Good Might Come Through It is hard to frown when the sun shines, even though the cold wind blows and cuts crossing barriers and high walls that don’t seem to stay strong but seem invisible and full of holes, or chinks, perhaps crevices, something empty and void, or perhaps should best be seen as fallible, so that somehow, in one way or another, something good might come through them, maybe. Perhaps I should just start chiseling widening the holes on my own, let the wind whistle through where it may, allow light to dapple grasses and pathways, and maybe even let some moisture come through. Perhaps, if I do that, the garden of love will grow, again. Yes, Grandmother… I am listening. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Keep listening for her Karilea.. I'm sure something good will come through. Heart hugs. In the midst of winter, |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Now perhaps this will not come across as being right - as my way of critique may be different in ways acceptable. Not to take the shadow or sunshine from your poem, but to leave my own words in the shade of those in appreciation of the above Even if in my case these words below were composed some 12 hours ago. I feel they answer my feelings of all of the above, in ways I cannot otherwise express. Although of a completely unrelated spirit of promoting. 5076 Barriers and Bridges 12 February 2006 I want to marry you this indeed could be true I want to dream your dream I want one and one to equal too This Tabitha of beauty to seek her being one of only in befriend Yet what was love - half a world away that can build barriers and not bridges which in structure guide each day This proposal of giving to care that love of one oh so fair I want to marry you because if that was true My world would be complete my heart overflowing in joy Then as I go to sleep at night I know my feeling have been neigh “For in the resurrection they neither marry, nor are given in marriage, but are as the angels of God in heaven.” Matthew 22: 30 KJV a poet who cares |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Perhaps, if I do that, the garden of love will grow, again." Lovely Sunshine. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
WHAt a maginificent poem Sunshine... |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Sunshine, your words always leave me feeling. :-) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Beautiful writing Karilea  Andrew |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh, you do know how to end an excellent poem, don't you!>???? And, I will work on that singing part you mentioned. thank you. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I'm listening, too. luv and hugs, cathy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Keep listening, dear lady... you're overdue for many things good. *S* |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
oh I love this, i never knew enough about my grandmothers...just as kids and we went to play...I wish I had known their wisdom...thank you for sharing yours |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "let the wind whistle through where it may, allow light to dapple grasses and pathways," I would agree with your grandmother!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Absolutely perfect. Thanks again Karilea. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SIL, did I ever tell you that I love your perspective? Well, I do! ....jo |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I take immense pleasure in your words Sunshine Someone said you called a colleage "love"; I said "I am London", I can get away with Darling Your words give a pleasure that transcends words Dave |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
What a great "telling" and the imagery was just wonderful. Thanks for sharing, Karilea. "If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead." |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Vwet nice write Sunshine! Thanks, Hugs, Kathy |
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