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...Your touch...
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...Your touch... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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. You touched my flawed body so gently with your eyes as later with the infinite gentleness of your mind when the words stopped screaming and turned to the slow rhythm of our discovered music. We traveled to where nothing could touch us neither malice nor envy or word or eye nothing concocted of gnarled minds nothing remotely created could touch us then we a little in fright of what we already knew as the foolish brave unstoppable words poured from us even in the great and utter silence of our hearts telling us of the bright thing that had begun. You touched my flawed life so gently with love burning upward in the dark steady flame burning me, burning me into healing. ~Dedicated~ |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Sounds like a place just this side of heaven.:-) |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
as good as it gets nancy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A delicate touch... and all wrapped in red...  . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Very powerful Enchantress. I greatly enjoyed it. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A gem, Nancy! ....jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Such beautiful writing, enjoyed Andrew |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (angel friendship hugs) Oh Nancy, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me tear up reading it because even if it is only a touch in my dreams, I can feel this healing consume me everytime I dream of my dream girl! (wipes tear) God Bless You, sweet friend, I'm sooooooo happy that your golden heart is blessed with this heavenly touch, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Oh, trust me, there's nothing flawed about you. This is a wonderful poem. I truly enjoy your work. Cheers - Ed Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it". |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
WOW Nancy - how well you say what you say...this is powerful - Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have no clue who this is dedicated to, but it is a treasure...and one of your finest...thanx for the share... |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
oooh....Good write Mom! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You touched my flawed body so gently with your eyes as later with the infinite gentleness of your mind Oh, YES! I know what you mean... Once I had such a gentle friend. Great to read your poetry again, Nancy. Take care. hugs, misce |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker such a beautiful and romantic poem. Someone is very blessed have this write dedicated to him. Very blessed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You touched my flawed body so gently with your eyes as later with the infinite gentleness of your mind when the words stopped screaming and turned to the slow rhythm of our discovered music. what a lovely dedication...it's so good to read you and this treasure you giving to someone very very special.. Hello Girl, hope your doing well |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, lady... this gentle touch is a powerful one... a lasting one... Beautiful!!!! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
You are superb Dave |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Nancy... such gentle but smouldering deep love within this write..enjoyed the read..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Nancy... such gentle but smouldering deep love within this write..enjoyed the read..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Each and every one of your replies is so very much appreciated. Thank you all who took the time to read and respond. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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starinthedark Junior Member
since 2006-02-13
Posts 32 |
Very feeling...with you all the way through it. Ahhhhh so sweet the memories of love. Starinthedark * |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...I believe in the power of love...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such a gorgeous write! Nancy, you always gift us such beautiful poetry! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You touched my flawed life so gently with love burning upward in the dark steady flame burning me, burning me into healing. Nancy, how powerful is the power of love!! This seems to be straight from your heart and I loved it. Thanks so much for sharing your "dedication" with us, my friend. Heart hugs to you, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My goodness~Thank you all so much once again!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ I could have sworn (but I don't do that  ) that I replied to this one ... but ... now happy to tell you just how beautiful I found it~ where it belongs~*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was beautiful very touching My spirit will rise |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You shape our minds with the word pictures you draw so skillfully and flawlessly. What a great write. And Happy Valentine's Day to you! Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Nancy, how poignantly beautiful this is to read! I have only known you a short while through the keyboard, but I have to agree with Edward...I only see beautiful there, too! I've heard people say that love is insanity, but there is nothing insane in its healing power, nes pas? hugs, ~ Klassy ~ |
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