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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2006-02-11 06:16 PM


A landscape

Sun dappled shade
Filled with whispers
Shimmering light
Caught within her hair
Meandering fingers
Skim the waters cold.


© Copyright 2006 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-11 06:55 PM


Lovely Andrew....much enjoyed the images.
Hugs~Nancy

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I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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2 posted 2006-02-11 07:13 PM


Although your poetry is short it knocks you over with its beauty.
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3 posted 2006-02-11 07:27 PM


Andrew

I love dappled anything...and really enjoyed the imagery of your poem!

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I see your muse isn't quite as dead as you had thought. (told you!)

Well done

and then He created the horse...

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Exquisite Andrew!

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6 posted 2006-02-15 07:32 AM


Another beautiful write~

~ARH

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7 posted 2006-02-15 12:15 PM


Though very short I thought it was worth the time to read.

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8 posted 2006-02-15 04:44 PM


Thank you for all the wonderful replies.

Andrew

Miserable Static

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