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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-02-11 03:42 PM



your criticism cuts me to the bone

it makes me want to moan

to you on a Nokia cell phone

when i think i can't own

           your heart

i've wanted you from the start

           of our past

but i was too broken apart to ask

     you more persistently

          for a date

to let you know i consistantly

          can't wait

        for your love



                                      love,

                                     howard



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1 posted 2006-02-12 01:49 AM


your writings warm hearts

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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