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Plum Fragrance

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Huan Yi
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Startled
Over winter snow—

The heron’s cry


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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Somewhere in time~


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Excellent John!!
Well done indeed.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

RedStoneEB
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Beauty in such few words
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A few choice words and yet you still manage to convey such vivid imagery. Enjoyed.

Andrew
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Good Job! I really do love your work
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I cry for the heron's illusion.
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