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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-02-11 08:42 AM

Those Veils Haiku

Sometimes we see veils
But the sun shines ever day
The moon evey night

scorpio
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right...there

1 posted 2006-02-11 12:47 PM

Clear and bright they shine Sy..just like your words.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-02-11 01:16 PM

Ah and the moon will be full tomorrow eve Sy..
making for a very bright night.
Lovely Haiku.
Time for tea?

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

3 posted 2006-02-11 01:18 PM

nice! enjoyed this from your mind's eye and pen

iliana
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USA

4 posted 2006-02-11 01:37 PM

Yep.

RedStoneEB
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uk

5 posted 2006-02-11 02:55 PM

Yes both the sun and the moon do shine

icebox
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in the shadows

6 posted 2006-02-11 04:26 PM

Great imagery!

Edward Grim
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Greenville, South Carolina

7 posted 2006-02-11 04:28 PM

Excelent Haiku. I really like your work. Cheers - Ed

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2006-02-11 05:45 PM

Sy?

Sometimes I take things
personally.

Like this poem.

I know it wasn't for me,
but it wore me well.

Thank you...even if
unintended.

Marshalzu

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Lurking

9 posted 2006-02-11 05:46 PM

Thank for sharing such a wonderul haiku

Andrew

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

10 posted 2006-02-11 11:18 PM

I love your haikus Sy. It's lovely.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

11 posted 2006-02-12 01:37 AM

yes they do shine
but not as much as you
nor the words you rhyme

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

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Indiana, USA

12 posted 2006-02-13 12:45 PM

Interesting...Thank you.

Kathy
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since 2006-02-10

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13 posted 2006-02-13 12:48 PM

Indeed!

Hugs,
Kathy

om
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since 2006-02-10

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ontario/canada

14 posted 2006-02-13 01:10 AM

nice unveiling twist!

tracie66
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Australia

15 posted 2006-02-13 04:22 AM

I love this Sy - Inspiring.

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

ice
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Pennsylvania

16 posted 2006-02-13 05:11 AM

Excellent!

Wisdom and vision expressed---

enjoyed
_______ ____ice
><>

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

17 posted 2006-02-13 01:23 PM

Even when we're too wrapped up in ourselves to peek out for a look. *S*

I like this, dear friend! *S*

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

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White Birch Forest

18 posted 2006-02-13 03:57 PM

Sy, a delightful haiku. And the veil lifted and the sun shone brightly on the snow from the nor'easter.

huggles, Marti

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