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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-02-11 01:12 AM


I am a fool


Some times when it snows out
Warmth returns to my hands
And my heart's beat slows down

Every thing slows down
The way the wind moves by
And also the snow drifts

I was such a dumb fool
Should have known come spring time
It would all melt away.

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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
1 posted 2006-02-11 03:44 AM


Ah, the symbolism in the snow and the spring. Well done

Yors truly
~Broken~

"Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away."

Peter Steele

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