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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-02-11 12:19 PM


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Sunshine over Ottawa
09 September 2005


Midnight was not far away
when in Ottawa - was
the beginning of a new day

A Canadian Sky
an ecstasy to bear
With a whisper of amour
so close in Quebec near

The Queensway a highway
toward the four - seventeen
and onward to a place in the U-S
As if Lake Ontario and the
Saint Lawrence were all
of being a nearby address

Sunrise glimmering in hope
sunshine over Rockcliffe Park
Meanwhile a world away time was
challenging where there would
be light in relation to what was dark


“If I beheld the sun when it shined,
or the moon walking in brightness;”
Job 31: 26 KJV




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© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-02-12 01:56 PM


Liked this - the image the vision

Yes

Dave

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-02-12 02:22 PM



I'm enjoying your offerings, Christopher.

Thank you.

.

poettothecars
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3 posted 2006-02-12 02:22 PM


This works can be viewed in two ways of several

To begin with, the Poet lives in New Zealand and has never been to Ottawa or even Canada, nor North America

This idea of two worlds and time zones
the poem waking - with the Poet about to go to bed in this case. His day over and the day in focus, a new day in Ottawa to begin. Although in this case starting 18 hours behind

A poem that touched more than just the initial person of focus. For another in reading this works - held the above words of the poem in her memory. The day she was herself, driving in Rockcliffe Park, Ottawa, Canada

It maybe why this offering appeared to go unnoticed for a brief period. Given the nature of the works. As with my Niagara works (Might of Niagara), imagery and imagination collide with the inner voice and spirit from within. Or my personal tribute to Bluegrass singer, Alison Krauss (Alison Maria)



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