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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2006-02-10 04:31 PM




In deep array of thoughtful bliss
Attuned to heart and passions way
Amidst the taste of wanted kiss
And all the things to hold at bay
The wicked thought of happiness
An outward smile from loneliness

Then mask the face and tell the lie
In pantomime of days pretend
Hiding from the questions why
Rejecting what the wise do lend
Feeding where the weeds won’t grow
Cursed by what so many know

Sleeping by a lovely dream
Near true to touch till mind’s awake
Blessed from what does hopeless seem
A moment free does passion make
Reflect upon through hours near
Finding what is you my dear

In deep array of thoughtful bliss
You walk with me in happy smile
It may be phantoms that I kiss
But even they may last a while
You hold my hand and touch my heart
Till moment's end and we depart

[This message has been edited by Rick (02-10-2006 11:27 PM).]

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-02-10 04:33 PM


Gorgeous writing, Rick.  
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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2 posted 2006-02-10 04:40 PM


Dear iliana, thank you for your lovely comment my friend, very much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-02-10 05:58 PM


"In deep array of thoughtful bliss
You walk with me in happy smile
It may be phantoms that I kiss
But even they may last a while
You hold my hand and touch my heart
Through moments thought; then drift apart"

How beautiful this is Rick!
I hope one day she is not just a dream to you.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2006-02-10 06:30 PM


Rick
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-02-10 10:18 PM





Captivating Rick. I really enjoyed.



Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
6 posted 2006-02-10 11:31 PM


Dear Nancy, wonderful to see you here my friend and I as well do hope kind lady. Thank you for your reply and time.

Seymour, thank you for your words, always much apprecitated.

The Lady, thank you for your reply, nice to see you here.

Thank you all my friends, may you all stay well and life enjoy.

Sincerely
Rick

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