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ahiru
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since 2006-01-05
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0 posted 2006-02-10 01:13 PM



If it’s bright,
If this light should ,
disperse this battle I’m fighting,
Than why do I feel this way?

What do you do…
when it doesn’t make you happy?
How do you cope…?
These feelings I can’t handle.

I don’t want to grab that rope,
It just causes more complications
I can’t stand to see it,
that porcelain bowl

I won’t grab an empty plate
You can’t stop me,
I want my fill.


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ManOfWolves28
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 83

1 posted 2006-02-10 02:08 PM


This is either dealing with an illness or a craving. Either way it has a fitting title.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

2 posted 2006-02-10 10:47 PM


Very Strong ending. I like it!
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