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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-02-10 11:50 AM



Near old pond
Above snow—
     In leafless branches

One squirrel
    Eating HoHos



© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Irie
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since 1999-12-01
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1 posted 2006-02-10 02:09 PM


What a fun Haiku ...
I haven't had a HoHo for years!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ... Swim out to it"

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2006-02-10 06:08 PM




A great picture John... made me laugh.



om
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since 2006-02-10
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ontario/canada
3 posted 2006-02-10 07:16 PM


So thats where they get all that energy...
I like your shorts/style! read a few now...
Fun stuff!

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4 posted 2006-02-10 07:55 PM


LOL--ya got me, pardner! Sucked me right in....and fed me HoHo's!

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Dominique-Simone
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5 posted 2006-02-10 10:39 PM


The end made me laugh out loud.

Great Write

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-23 02:24 PM


clever!!!! and then?
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