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consequential azure
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consequential azure |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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flower of drago’s summer in pale fragility does the warning of our waters sooth you when your fingers touch the rippling like a lover tasting lip side dreams do you walk the sandy shores of evening with bare feet and little hesitation under the breezes that speak to azure of the curves of your charmery and do you stand in the willow's shade waiting with your eyes pretending as hands to touch my shoulders sooner than my thoughts can speak your name is it your perfume that is the cloud that rides the sky sides stallions at gallop to the marble of my welcoming where there waits but two dancers to be our consequential entwining ________________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are the moon rider of words, a music that no surround sound could capture like the philosoper nature, whom I love to view from my lawn chair, staring into her soul beautiful |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Lee J, you bless me lady friend, thank you always |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a dance of two intertwining as one both seeping sighs My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms groves, thank you for the eyes here |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkOne~ Ah, 'tis a Friday-kinda-*sigh*~ 'when your fingers touch the rippling like a lover tasting lip side dreams' You gathered me in your hue of lapis lazuli~ I am now adrift on a cerulean sea of thought~ Thank you so much for Friday~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lovely Marge...you do make Friday a wordthy day for contimplation..thank you for your slow sway here, you always bless me with your smile |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 To be pointedly correct to the poem, the answer to the walk would be, yes. Azure steps, indeed.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think there are several yes's in this reply...poetry is in your blood. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"is it your perfume that is the cloud that rides the sky sides stallions at gallop to the marble of my welcoming where there waits but two dancers" You know Stranger, there are some poems that just weave themselves into your mind and go where they will. This is so lovely. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is very good... It reminds me of renissance poetry. romantic and telling. |
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