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I Blame You
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I Blame You |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
I Blame You Eligible cats snoop around and I'm with them I've always tried to tell you how sorry I am And never thought you'll leave home I don't know where I stand Will someone take my hand ? I blame you My life will never be the same I blame you Because I can't see right through your eyes I blame you Because you've never believed in me I blame you I don't have self-esteem only tears Loneliness captured me, I cried every night Fetching your fingertips, slipping, you're leaving me again My heart can't bear these knocks and slams, And wind blows my memories away I wish you could just stay, with me I blame you I shiver every time I see your face in mine I blame you Because my character and yours are alike I blame you Because it aches to know you're gone I blame you And never saw you for real And never saw you for real Bridge: Nobody cared when I shed tears Nobody cared when I woke up with fears Nobody revealed or showed a regret Nobody took care when I was soaking wet Nobody was there to hold my hand Nobody was there except my dreams and they're now dead I blame you For not asking why I blame you For not giving a shoulder to cry I blame you Because pain exists and not only in my dreams I blame you Because your leaving is a beast no one redeems And still, I miss you every Sunday morning. Danni@rtist |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
feels the heavy of your sombre poet White Gold Wielder |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Yes indeed. Heartrending poem. I love your "eligible cats" and the last line is great. |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
I want to thank you both for your lovely comments. THANK YOU ! Truly yours, Danni@rtist |
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