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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2006-02-09 08:54 AM


the end of morning tackled me
like
blue smoke,
slurring
some reality i couldn’t
feel or touch
penalties,
bannered uneasy spectacles
with bold temper,
on a narrow sidewalk

i heard a melodramatic spotlight mutter
glances my way,
then
there was magic in the wind
painting weather in
remarkable condition
right over my
large dark bay windows
like some breathless
rumor passing
over a lover’s lips
powerfully suggestive

awakening my own secrets,
unfolded
dancing little feet of
satin, brocade
climbing to full attention,
eager
to experience
some third degree of life

more spiritual and perfect then the
breath of humanity combined
it is a humble impulse
of affectionate arms
furious for dwelling
in the purified hallmark of
simplicity, courage & lucidity
the love
of silence and solitude
listening to the words of another
boasting no reasons, simply following
the treasure of this
quiet intimate experience

i am deeply convinced,
none of these desires
are alive in sexual intimacy...
but more so
a communion of friendship with self…
an inner castle of
worship in visions
of union, moving closer, closer still
till i shiver
trying to fathom this heavenly beauty
right within our midst

i chance to know a spiritual espousal
sparkling like the
mystery of celtic music
that cannons green foliage
in its flightiness of thought
to the least of all christians…
perhaps the
most curious in this alien land?
it takes its beginning with me,
bestowing
the scent of divine
predestination
where some
voice of silence
surrounds the existence
of me


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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-02-09 12:00 PM


"awakening my own secrets,
unfolded
dancing little feet of
satin, brocade
climbing to full attention,
eager
to experience
some third degree of life"


Yes!  We all should take this advice
Beautiful LJ


JL


Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-02-09 12:03 PM


LeeJ,
Now that's what I call a daydream.
Good morning sweety.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2006-02-09 01:34 PM


But it's no daydream, is it LeeJ?  Excellent write for those who can understand!
Dominique-Simone
Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

4 posted 2006-02-10 10:56 PM


I agree with Honeybunch.. This is expertly written
Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
5 posted 2006-02-10 11:05 PM


Dear Lee, your mind stretches much further than mine and tells many things to the understanding, I read and I very much enjoyed your thoughts, thank you my friend.

Sincerely
Rick

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