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klose pins and whipped kream
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klose pins and whipped kream |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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close pins and whipped cream and something cold that burns when the skin is introduced conversations in line at smart and temporary because you will always be back for what was forgotten even when it was the single thing you came here for, before the conversations and amber eyes and a bit of sin erased the mind list refrigerator and left you with empty bags wanting more _____________ daark scribblenote; smart and final...a little late in the evening and some distractions |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Leave your distractions in the empty bags... something smart, indeed. Smiling at you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Big smile. I love it. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
smart final interesting, the way you discribe and paint pictures My spirit will rise |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
 you are talented honey |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Still a very well written poem |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pipgang..thanks to you each for the reply..you bless me Sunshine slow hugs to you, Lady, a bow and a nod, ms groves a naughty glance and a wicked smile, ms whiskey, the next dances are mine, and I love honey. Friend Red, a nod and a sincere appreciation |
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