navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » Signal
Open Poetry #37
Post A Reply Post New Topic Signal Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2006-02-09 12:44 PM


radio signal
in the night
peaked
being monitored
in another dimension
master sees
listens

speak even
relate to source
tread softly of
prophecies
islands formed
from broken coasts

evolution
in the night
peaked signal
hidden dimension
passes through walls
pitch of sound
master sees
listens


spoken soundly
footprints recorded
master keeps tally
prohecies, progress
inland seas from deserts
islands from broken coasts

© Copyright 2006 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
MGROVES
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
1 posted 2006-02-09 02:37 AM


interesting

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-02-09 03:47 AM


Yes, I agree, it is interesting thought.  
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-02-09 06:23 AM


evolution
in the night...

would be a great title...reminds me of today's lesson, Martin, working with young children and in Science...discussing what is soil made of and what is made from soil

( sorry, I have simple thoughts   and a pounding morning headache )

M

ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
4 posted 2006-02-09 11:00 PM


I have simple thoughts too


Dominique-Simone
Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

5 posted 2006-02-10 10:53 PM


Yes Interesting and Intriguing.. Enjoyed!
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-02-10 11:00 PM




Enjoyed Martin.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #37 » Signal

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary